My idea for dealers’ choice is about a life’s journey to and from work as my metaphor of ‘the walk.’ The video will have a man walking and interacting in his daily life as music is playing while he consciously thinks out loud. I see the video as being poetic. There are some scenes of the character in a library, bus, and passing by a person on the street. I am seeking to reveal ones humanity of walking the same road everyday as the character consciously thinks of his life and new encounters.





You video is a bit similar to my idea in that the character is walking down a road! Would like to know more about what the character is thinking though
ReplyDeleteNot seeing any real big problems with your plan other than the shooting on the bus... they may not allow you to do that. I would encourage you to move away from the whole "character walking to work" idea seeing as how you did that in your last project. I think you can totally do this whole poetic monologue thing, which sounds really good, I just think we want to see what else you can shoot!
ReplyDeleteI agree with Hannah- I feel like just shots of him moving to different places might have more meaning if you emphasize what he's thinking in some way. Maybe some shots could give clues of this, or the sound.
ReplyDeleteSee if you can make the thoughts of the person relate to some of the visuals, experiment by re working the narrative to some of the things seen in shots.
ReplyDeleteReally be careful so that this project doesnt end up looking like the last one. I think you can better portray your thoughts in a poetic way.
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