Reflection From Second film.

After critique, I find myself going back to the drawing broad in presenting my images on screen. The images are to dark as well as not visually interesting for my audience. Also, my dialog needs work though it is the strongest element in the film. I have thought of some new images for the film though I am not certain. I believe I will get another person to help with film. I believe that was one of my downfalls on shooting the film as well as being very tired.